Activity 3: The Sky in Shanghai [10 points]
One day I would really like to travel to China. It is a country with a rich history, vibrant cities, tasty food, and fascinating architecture (buildings). Unfortunately, some of the largest Chinese cities have high rates of air pollution. The air pollution in Beijing, one of the largest cities in China, can get so bad that roads are closed, flights are cancelled and events are postponed while they wait for the smog in the air to clear. The terrible pollution is also having fatal (deadly) effects as, approximately, 1.1 million people in China died last year from air pollution-related causes. The Chinese government is very concerned and they have introduced a number of strategies (ideas) to reduce the pollution levels. Imagine that you were asked to travel to Beijing. How would you feel?
On your blog, write a poem that describes your feelings about travelling to Beijing, China.
I arrived in China a wonderful place,
The people were kind with beautiful faces
the veiws were pretty too
and don't get me started
the food are yum too
The people are rich
and the kids are shy
1 comment:
Hello Tyra,
I like really your initiation, and your ideas. Your poem could sound like a book authors one if you change a few things. Well done for trying your hardest!
I would recommend that you try to add capital letters in between lines and try to give different paragraphs for different ideas. That's it, it's not far off from perfect isn't it! My favourite line in that the people were 'kind with beautiful faces' because you are appreciating the people in China.
Do you want to go to China?
Happy Blogging
Gargee HPS
hpsgargeej.blogspot.co.nz
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